A Horror/Thriller Film
Characters:
Good
(protagonist)
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Evil
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Both
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Man wrong place in the wrong time
Poplar oblivious girl (cheerleader)
Blond Ditzy, Redheads
TBG
Hippy
Dectetive
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Psycho Woman (hot)
Evil Genius
Zombies
Old fat man
Creatures
Vampire
Wearwolf
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Schizophrenic
Mutated thing
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Location
Dark Alleys
School Hallways
A house on a Hill
Graveyard
Abandoned wardrobe
Slaughterhouse
Prom night
Items
Torch
Knives
Gun
Chainsaw
Socery/Spells
Smoke
Legends
Sorceries
Urban myths
Ingredients
- A detective who is haunted by an unsolved case that caused the death in his only son. He also strongly disbelieves in vampires (or anything supernatural) and refuses to bring them to context
- A graveyard
- An evil genius vampire
- A murdered Cheerleader drained of blood and wide open shocked eyes
- A murdered family man also drained of blood and eyes wide and a weird but scary expression on his face
- A murdered child with a carved in smile on his face also drained of blood.
- A small town “in the middle of no where” with supposed curse of vampires
- A big built, burger eating, sherif
- Local Cafe
- A grey dingy mortuary
- Flashbacks
- A deserted park with coloured playgrounds and trees
- A howling grandmother who talks about "They are back!"
- Dingy local hotel
- Cold breeze
- Long chat with the evil mastermind when he could of just shot him
- Unknow officer
Method:
- Add the detective to the small town which is brought up on tales of vampires that used to roam the town and add a sheriff to aid the detective. Place them both in a café (the sheriff with a burger and the detective without any seasoning)
- Mix in the already dead cheerleader and family man in the mortuary. Have the detective find leads but too many to be clear on which is right.
- Add a handful of flashbacks about the Detectives son to throw the detective off his game and this will heat things up. But to stop the detective’s brain from exploding add the sheriff in with the mix and this will cool things down.
- Add a chilly breeze and take both the Detective and the sheriff to the deserted park where there is already the murdered boy and to add effect, have him hanging off a climbing frame.
- Add the howling grandmother to increase effect. This will allow her to push around the Detective and at this stage you will need to add in some more flashbacks, this time starting with the son playing in the playground then him in a grave basket
- Take the boy, sheriff and detective out of the park and place them into the mortuary.
- Add two handfulls of flashbacks whenever the detective looks at the boy but then take the detective out and place him in his dingy hotel
- Add the specific flashbacks of his son in the mortuary whilst the detective is trying to get to sleep, thus keeping him awake and then let him “playback” through so the audience will now see that his son was drained of blood and smiling when he was dead. Have the detective relise a link to an abdonded house on the edge of town.
- Let him now put the pieces together and prove to the sheriff that they are linked. Allow these links to lead them to a old dingy house on the edge of the town. Add smoke to increase effect.
- Split them up into sections placing the unknown officer with the detective. Have shreaks coming from the wall which will make the unknown officer trigger happy and lots of gun shot follow.
- Keep the detective on a cool level even when the unknown officer gets dragged away.
- Lead the detective to the vampire and then the audience will relies that the vampire is a small boy with bloodshot eyes in the basement of the house and have the detective circle him and then have the vampire tell him "don't you remember me? can't you even reconsise your own son!"
- Now have the detective lower his gun as the boy goes and tells his turning into a vampire and his life story. Get the vampire to circle his father pausing at his neck and telling him how great it is to be a vampire.
- When the detective is on the bridge of allowing his vampire son to turn him. Then cut to the sheriff in the corridor and then have him find the room where the detective is in and kick the door down and shoot the vampire with a stake.
- Let the vampire/son look confused and then fall and have the detective catch him. Get the son's eyes to go normal and say "daddy?"
- To finish off have the detective talk to the sheriff at the back of the house where the sheriff is thanking him for helping. Then let the sheriff see a bite on the detective's neck, have the detective look up and his eyes are red (sign of vampire). Have the sheriff stumble backwards, arms out "no, no" and then have the final shot being the detective lunging towards him
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