Monday, 14 May 2012

Planning inc. plot outline and brief on senes


Characters (in brief)

Katherine (Katie) Samules: Main Protagionist, Cop
Skyla Brown: Partner to Katherine
Victor Irving: Antagionist, drug lord
Ella Treasime (Cinderella): Minor character, (clutzly jewel thief)

Settings:
Percent: ((same as discussed))
Use one of the History classrooms, set the desks up in groups of 4 facing eachother. Have tubes of stationery and laptops on the computers. Will need extras to be on the other desks. White board has the images what are on clipboard on the board and writing beside it highlighting important points. Red and blue text in capitals.
Outside Building: !!! (we just need one of these) When they get out of the car blue standard car they are outside the school on cougal street but we cant see the school, rather the buildings opposite. When they both look around to the building, the building in the theater block and they walk out of the shot without the camera following
Lift:
Set of 3 but focus is on the middle lift. The carpet is a musky grey and soft and has handling on either side of the lift. No mirrors, but has grey glass lining the edge of the lift. Two sets of buttons, one located near the doors ([][]) – looks like that, two sides that fold away, buttons near the door are vertical we as ones on the left side (facing out) are horizontal.
- We will need an extra light to adjust lighting for we cannot tamper with the lights
House/Lair:  (same as discussed)
Stairs: dark, grey concrete with some stains, dark and empty, will need to bring a light to adjust lighting.
Carpark: grey concrete, cars, oil stains, speed bumps, skid marks, parking signs

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Plot
1.     Follows Katie into the percent, Katie sees Skyla who is sitting on a table looking over a clipboard with profiled notes on it. Katie and Skyla exchange greetings and Katie asks ‘What have we got here?” (or such). Skyla hands Katie the clipboard and “see for yourself” (etc). We see the first image of a large diamond and shots of area where diamond was taken from, pictures with dates and information about the diamond and museum (where it was from etc). Flipping over we see a character profile with image of Ella Treasime aka. Cinderella. Skyla talks over saying she stole the diamond but as usual they were able to find something to link to where she was going. Flips over the file, image and profile of Victor. Talks about how it is their first chance to catch him in years and they know exactly where he is. “well u ready?” “sure am” (kaite – skyla) they walk to a lift and we see the doors shut on them from the outside looking out
2.     Slamming the doors to a car. They get out of the car outside a building and they both pull out guns and look at eachother and smile “Ladies first?” Skyla asks Katie, Kaite laughs/huffs gives her a stare and beings to enter the house. The door is slightly adjar and Kaite pushes it open, quickly bringing her hand back to her gun (like this ) Skyla picks up a bit of the open packet of white powder and sniffs it “cocaine, this is the place”
3.     They hear a scream from downstairs, they turn around suddenly, guns raised again and Katie pulls open a door and they both rush down the stairs into a carpark…. Katie looks around the corner while Skyla turns around trying to figure out where they are, then she tells to Katie “this is the carpark on ____ street, he building must be lined. I’ll check round the back” (or similar)
4.     Katie turn the corner to find a sobbing, beaten up Ella and Victor happily examining a diamond and placing it in his pocket. (can we have him in some big giant coat with huge pockets pleaseeeee!!!) “well well well, they sure have gotten younger, do you even know how to use that gun, pretty thing?” Katie fires a shot to the left of him, he looks surprised for a split second, smiles back at her, “your going to have to do better than that.” Stepping back, still smiling he stops as his head reaches Skyla’s gun (she has come round the back). He looks to either side but sighs as he cannot find a way out. He puts his hands behind his head and Skyla clamps them together while Katie (coming forward) takes the diamond out of his pocket.
5.      Skipped to a bit later where Skyla has a phone to her ear and then puts it down. “They’ll be here in 5”. Victor is chained to a car handle, and Katie looks up at Skyla then turns, conserned to something behind her. Ella has a gun and says “and by that time I will be gone,” Katie looks at her gun which is on the bonnet of the car, too far away to get to before Ella shoots “so you just stay here” Skyla (who the gun is directally pointed at) puts he hands up (kinda like an ok fine ish way) and steps back. Ella takes a quick worried glance and races off. Katie huffs at Skyla while grabbing her gun. She looks at Victor and says “you just stay put for a bit” then back to Skyla, “ready” she asks “sure am” Skyla replies and it ends on Katie smiling and leaving the shot.




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